I like the synths. I listened on laptop speakers, and I thought the instruments stood out pretty well, although the drums needed meat - again, this is on laptop speakers, so the lack of depth is more on my end than on yours.
The lyrics were a little odd, and the meter for the lyrics was offputting.
"Need some he-e-elp..." ... extending "help" like that is ineffective, because the word itself is one syllable, and ends weakly. "I really need some assistance" would flow better.
Plus: Why? Why do you need some help? You get this feeling you're headed for a far better day... where does the need for help play into that?